PLEASE READ MY IDEA

The remnants of the legendary Al'Tor Dul'Gar (extremly powerful mages) are once again on the run from the Dark Lord, Arion. A select few have met together in secret to plot the resitance group they call Del'Ranius. As they grow stronger so does the Dark Lord.
That's is as far as I've gotton.
I'd like any changes that you want.

ok i red...i actually think it's not bad

I know it's definately not the best but.. you know it's my first idea.

well death >_> its nice but maby some more background history on this dark lord and the 2 mages >_> like was there a show down or something and the mages were only able to seal him for a short time but now he is free? .... just alittle background history .... i might do another great clan rp >_> but got some shit to look into first

duke's right death more...info...

Okay... well the Dark Lord was brought into power by sheer strength of mind. The mages had to do something so they made a last ditch effort to attack his palace. Using almost every drop of mana in their bodies they made his beloved castle his prison for many many years... but as all was not good and light he was set free and his reign became supreme once more... how was that for more detail?

gewd

mutch behtur

Thank you thank you